Viet doan van mieu ta hoat dong tinh nguyen
Muc tieu
Sau bai hoc nay, em viet duoc mot doan van 5-6 cau mieu ta mot hoat dong tinh nguyen, theo dung cau truc topic sentence — cau ho tro — cau ket, va su dung dung ngu phap, tu vung da hoc trong ca chuong nay.
Bai truoc em da doc va hieu mot doan van mau ve hoat dong tinh nguyen. Bai nay lam nguoc lai: dung chinh nhung y tuong, tu vung va cau truc ngu phap da gap de tu tay xay dung mot doan van hoan chinh cua rieng minh.
Cau hoi khoi dong
Co giao yeu cau ca lop viet mot doan van ngan mieu ta mot hoat dong tinh nguyen ma lop da hoac se tham gia. Phong dinh viet nhung khong biet bat dau tu dau — nen mo dau bang cau gi, can nhac den nhung y nao, va ket thuc ra sao cho tron ven.
Cau truc mot doan van mieu ta hoat dong tinh nguyen
Mot doan van tot bat dau bang topic sentence — cau chu de neu ro hoat dong la gi va lop nao thuc hien: 'Last month, my class organised a small volunteer day to help an elderly people's centre in our neighbourhood.' Cau nay tra loi truoc ca bon cau hoi what, who, khi nao.
Cac cau ho tro tiep theo tra loi lan luot: dia diem cu the (o dau, dung there is/are hoac gioi tu vi tri neu can), hanh dong cu the da lam (dung dong tu tinh nguyen nhu donate, clean up, help the elderly), va cam nhan cua nguoi tham gia. Moi cau ho tro nen them mot thong tin moi, khong lap lai y cua cau truoc.
Cau ket thuong neu ly do hoat dong quan trong, hoac de xuat mot hoat dong tiep theo bang should/could da hoc: 'I think we should organise more volunteer days like this in the future.' Mot doan van co du ba phan — mo dau, than doan, ket luan — se duoc danh gia cao hon nhieu so voi mot day cau roi rac khong lien ket.
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De bai: Viet cau chu de cho mot doan van ve buoi tinh nguyen don ve sinh bo song cua lop 7A vao thang truoc. Bay: viet mot cau qua chung chung nhu 'We did something good', khong neu ro hoat dong va thoi gian.
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Cau chu de tot can neu ro ba thong tin: hoat dong (clean up the riverbank), lop nao (Class 7A), va thoi gian (last month).
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(a) We did something good last month — loai vi qua chung chung, khong neu ro hoat dong la gi. (b) Last month, Class 7A organised a riverbank clean-up day — dung, neu du ca ba thong tin can thiet. (c) Class 7A is a good class — loai vi khong lien quan den hoat dong tinh nguyen ma de bai yeu cau. (d) The riverbank was dirty last month — loai vi chi mieu ta tinh trang truoc do, khong gioi thieu duoc hoat dong cua lop.
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Last month, Class 7A organised a riverbank clean-up day.
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Cau chu de tot luon tra loi truoc ca hoat dong, ai lam, va khi nao. Bien the: doi riverbank clean-up thanh a book donation day.
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De bai: Ket thuc doan van bang mot de xuat ve hoat dong tiep theo, dung should. Bay: viet cau ket chi lap lai y da noi o cau chu de, khong them y nghia hay de xuat moi.
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Cau ket tot nen dung should + V nguyen mau de neu y kien ve tuong lai, khac voi cau chu de chi mieu ta qua khu.
- 3(a) Class 7A organised a riverbank clean-up day — loai vi chi lap lai y cua cau chu de, khong them gia tri gi moi. (b) I think we should organise more clean-up days like this — dung, dung should de de xuat hanh dong tuong lai. (c) I think we should to organise more clean-up days like this — loai vi thua to sau should. (d) I think we must organise more clean-up days like this — loai vi must qua manh, mang tinh bat buoc, khong phu hop voi mot loi de xuat ca nhan nhe nhang trong doan van.
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I think we should organise more clean-up days like this.
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Cau ket bang should the hien y kien ve tuong lai, khong lap lai thong tin da noi. Bien the: doi clean-up days thanh charity events.
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De bai: Them mot cau ho tro mieu ta dia diem dien ra buoi tinh nguyen, dung there is/are hoac gioi tu vi tri da hoc o Chuong 2. Bay: viet mot cau khong lien quan den dia diem, chi lap lai y hoat dong da neu o cau chu de.
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Cau ho tro dia diem can neu ro noi chon, co the dung there is/are de gioi thieu hoac gioi tu vi tri de gan hoat dong voi mot moc quen thuoc.
- 3(a) Class 7A organised the clean-up day near the old market, next to the river. — dung, them chi tiet dia diem cu the bang gioi tu vi tri. (b) Class 7A organised the clean-up day very well. — loai vi khong lien quan den dia diem, chi la nhan xet chung chung. (c) Class 7A is a good class. — loai vi khong noi gi ve dia diem, lac de. (d) Class 7A organised the clean-up day, and it was a clean-up day. — loai vi lap lai chinh no, khong them thong tin gi moi.
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Class 7A organised the clean-up day near the old market, next to the river.
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Cau ho tro dia diem nen dung gioi tu vi tri hoac there is/are da hoc, gan hoat dong voi mot moc cu the de nguoi doc hinh dung ro rang.
Loi hay gap nhat khi viet doan van la de cac cau roi rac, khong cau nao lien ket voi cau truoc: neu cau hai lap lai y cua cau mot, hoac cau ket khong them y nghia gi moi, doan van se doc nhu mot danh sach thay vi mot cau chuyen mach lac. Moi cau can them dung mot thong tin moi.
Luyen tap co huong dan
Luyen tap doc lap
Kiem tra nhanh
Ghi nho
Mot doan van mieu ta hoat dong tinh nguyen tot co ba phan ro rang: cau chu de neu du hoat dong/ai/khi nao, cac cau ho tro them chi tiet dia diem va hanh dong, va cau ket neu y nghia hoac de xuat bang should/could.
Bai cuoi cung cua khoa hoc se on lai toan bo ngu phap va tu vung cua ca hai chu de — dich vu cong cong va tinh nguyen — trong cac dang bai thi giua ky/cuoi ky that.